EvilZone
Other => Creative Arts => Topic started by: hanorotu on September 12, 2012, 11:06:01 PM
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Yo, chron, I see you still rocking that shitty name,
Makin' little girls cry in your stupid game,
Catchin' people off guard in your city man.
You talking about your psychological prowess,
when in reality you don't have the assets,
to take down anything
I rap so fast I make your ears ring
Showing more results than google or bing
Welcome back to the site
I think we need to bring back the hype
and restore the formal glory
back the days when all the gory
violence was enough to hurt
and when the battle was through
the strong stood tall enough
to see that the road was rough
while everyone else died
their only alibis
being that they still lived at home
searching through their porn
through the sake of scorn
from the aproaching swarm
of hackers and cracker and multitaskers
Yeah, a little rusty. You willing?
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Who are you to call me out,
I'd diss you on the way to a real battle
If that don't shut you up, ill pass you a rattle
Your a baby in the game, aiming at me to make a name
Your gonna get slain, find yo ass in a drain
Not from death but from shame
Chronic x will be the one to blame
Don't question my skill or ill pop you like a pill
Cybered with your bitch and gave er a virus,
You'll end up like a fan, nothing to say just a clap.
Pardon me, if it makes it better she said your almost as good as me
I know she's a blonde, her and chronic got a bond
When it comes to pleasing a bitch, chronic is a gurantee
Get em wet,make em sweat quicker then a corvette
Now for mercy you'll have to beg and plea
Wait I fucked your bitch
So I guess you paid the fee.
At work, so kinda busy.
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Through wary eyes I do read
Have thy not bear fruit to thine need?
Battles and war does break
In the name if evilzones sake?
Nie doth says I
To which this quary shall die.
Love is what shall be spread
Not le trolls haf thy fed.
In a fury thy fingers of the keyboard do tell
Let love spread through the halls of mead,
Not battles of rap of hell,
In a glory of light I tell,
Love is all evilzone shall need.
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Techb, love is a battlefield and I'm the general
Always ready to fight, an evil knight
But this aint about love, its a rap
Hanorotu gave me a push and a shove
So I'm here to rise above
I have respect for you,
So don't get in the crossfire
When it comes to dissing, I'm a killer for hire
Your poems, I admire
But its not my game
Rap is my life
So love me or hate me,
Poems won't flare me
But rap makes me come alive
Like a mother giving birth, rap made me.
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Techb, love is a battlefield and I'm the general
Always ready to fight, an evil knight
But this aint about love, its a rap
Hanorotu gave me a push and a shove
So I'm here to rise above
I have respect for you,
So don't get in the crossfire
When it comes to dissing, I'm a killer for hire
Your poems, I admire
But its not my game
Rap is my life
So love me or hate me,
Poems won't flare me
But rap makes me come alive
Like a mother giving birth, rap made me.
Hey that was pretty good..
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Hey that was pretty good..
Thank you, I appreciate it.
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Techb, love is a battlefield and I'm the general
Always ready to fight, an evil knight
But this aint about love, its a rap
Hanorotu gave me a push and a shove
So I'm here to rise above
I have respect for you,
So don't get in the crossfire
When it comes to dissing, I'm a killer for hire
Your poems, I admire
But its not my game
Rap is my life
So love me or hate me,
Poems won't flare me
But rap makes me come alive
Like a mother giving birth, rap made me.
AWESOME :)
clap clap +1 >>>>> applauds
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AWESOME :)
clap clap +1 >>>>> applauds
Thank you for your feedback, i really appreciate it. More then you know.
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Is that all you got?
You think your rhymes are hot.
Is that the best you can do?
Well now you're screwed
You talk your shit about my girlfriend
but in the end we all know
that's not how it's gonna go
it's all a cover up so you can smother up
to all the guys that you know deep inside
that you sir are a faggot
tbh you got me yet again
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Through wary eyes I do read
Have thy not bear fruit to thine need?
Battles and war does break
In the name if evilzones sake?
Nie doth says I
To which this quary shall die.
Love is what shall be spread
Not le trolls haf thy fed.
In a fury thy fingers of the keyboard do tell
Let love spread through the halls of mead,
Not battles of rap of hell,
In a glory of light I tell,
Love is all evilzone shall need.
Now taste this iambic pentameter,
Ready? My sonnets are legendary.
For I supply more 'burn' than your heater,
You know that my words are incendiary.
Now hear ye, hear ye hackers and nooblets,
I'm here to bring the pain to Tech B-atch
This guy tech eats more shit than your toilets,
He gets less girls than a vegetable patch.
And Just because I'm not a l33t Hax0r,
And I can't go hack my ex's facebook,
Doesn't mean I can't come here and deplore,
Tech B's rhymes and let you all take a look.
Accept I'm the best, don't kick up a fuss,
Because "all your base are belong to us"
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Lol first time I've tried one of these. I gave it a go and managed to stick to the ABAB CC sonnet form but I'm afraid the content isn't as good as I hoped (especially the end) . I don't mean to pick on you Tech-B it's just you were the only other person who did a poem ;D Which was very good btw.
I tried.
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I liked it and am also very proud of the participation
(http://static.tumblr.com/k5lgmbs/gZXm7hhc2/oh_god_what_have_i_done.jpg)
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Techb, love is a battlefield and I'm the general
Always ready to fight, an evil knight
But this aint about love, its a rap
Hanorotu gave me a push and a shove
So I'm here to rise above
I have respect for you,
So don't get in the crossfire
When it comes to dissing, I'm a killer for hire
Your poems, I admire
But its not my game
Rap is my life
So love me or hate me,
Poems won't flare me
But rap makes me come alive
Like a mother giving birth, rap made me.
(http://www.halforums.com/xenforo/attachments/citizen-kane-gif.4830/)
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Is that all you got?
You think your rhymes are hot.
Is that the best you can do?
Well now you're screwed
You talk your shit about my girlfriend
but in the end we all know
that's not how it's gonna go
it's all a cover up so you can smother up
to all the guys that you know deep inside
that you sir are a faggot
tbh you got me yet again
Yeah i think my shits hot
Off-Guard, you were caught
You don't even see my plot
to murder you and end you, the way noone has before
through rhymes and disses and words with meanings
Same will happen to anyone caught intervening
you dont wanna provoke me jake
i was in a coma, now im awake
the crown, i've returned to take
i'm on a whole different level
dont wanna call me chronic, call me the devil
I'm about to give up on you like a underage mother
Your rhymes have slipped, oh brother
Now you know, Chronic don't play
so until you try again
Fuck you and have a nice day.
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Maybe tomorrow :P
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To the retard who threatened me to mess up my life digitally:
I think you think that you can think faster then I think
But the truth is that I'll own you faster then your eyes can blink
My crazy little mind is capable of causing havoc
My sick shellcoding skills will make you look like fagot
So many tried to beat me and all of them have failed
Because my mental prowess has buried them in flames
So many tried to back-stab me yet all of them are dead
Because I never walk around without a baseball bat
Rest in peace...